Monday, November 28, 2011

Placid

When my family friend told a story about what happened to one of his patients he was very placid. Even though the story was scary he still spoke very calmly.
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  1. BillDecember 8, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    Good detail in these sentences.
    Both sentences need a comma after their introductory dependent clauses.

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